Thursday, April 11, 2013

Reflections on Research of Ray Puglia


Reflections on Research
Andrew Serafim
English 111

Using the method of gathering information from actual artifacts was an interesting process that I have never taken advantage of before. Using the artifacts found in the trunk my group and I were able to construct a general timeline of Ray Puglia’s life. Being able to discuss the items found with my group allowed everyone to have input and insight into what the items really could mean. Some of the people in my group had more knowledge on some of the items than I did, such as the medals that Ray had been awarded. Keeping notes helped to allow me to come back to the project and pick up right where I stopped, which was convenient to not have to do all the research again. At the beginning of this research project my group and I were gathering lots of information, later we were able to step back and piece things together to make sense of what information we had gathered.  Having other groups input as well as Professor Brandon’s knowledge of Ray helped make sense of some areas our group was struggling to figure out. Opening up questions to the whole class was a useful way to clarify our findings and see what others had found. Knowing what major events were happening during Ray’s life really helped to put some of the items from his trunk into perspective. Knowing he was going through wars and having background history on those wars helped define the kind of life Ray had. 

Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Ray Puglia Biography Works Cited

Biography Works Cited

Andrew Serafim

English 111

4/11/13




All information came from Professor Brandon's trunk that was used to find details of Ray Puglia's life.

Some other information came from classmates, who found additional things from the trunk.

Ray Puglia Biography


Ray Puglia Biography
Andrew Serafim
Eng 111
4/9/13

          Ray Carmine Puglia’s life cannot be summed up easily as one might think. Who was Ray Puglia? What did he enjoy? How did he live? These are all questions that are asked to find the answers of who Ray was. After carefully sifting through some of Ray’s belongings, evidence has come together to give us a small clip of who was behind the name, who was behind the artifacts.
          Ray Carmine Puglia was born on May 10th 1915 into an Italian Catholic family. His faith stays with him throughout all of his experiences in life. Ray was patriotic and served his country for many years of his life. Enlisting into the Marine Corp before World War II Ray was a part of the “Dog Company”, which was a Battalion of the 24th Marines focused on heavy weapons.  Ray also went on to serve during the Korean War and the Vietnam War which had heavy influences on his way of life. During these wars Ray received two purple hearts for his commitment to helping others.
          Ray was married to Eva Stavler, who was 21 years his senior. Eva was also a part of the military. She enlisted into the Naval Reserves in 1918. Ray and Eva lived many places throughout their lives including Philadelphia and later Jacksonville NC until Eva passed away on April 17th 1969. Ray remarried later to Elizabeth Johnson and raised a family with her until he passed away from lung cancer.
          These small glimpses into the life of Ray help us to connect with him through some of his most personal and life changing events. Hardly does this sum up every detail of Ray’s life but is more of an overview into what he dealt with. The evidence clearly supports the notion that Ray Puglia was a caring friend, enthusiastic for life and patriotic towards his country. 

Thursday, April 4, 2013

Research Notes on Ray Puglia's Trunk

Research Notes 

Conclusion: Had a wife named Eva Stabler Marie Puglia that was born on Feb. 19th 1894, enlisted in the naval reserve in 1918 and passed away on April 17th 1969.

Evidence: pictures, hospital card, memorial service card, notes

Conclusion: Was born May 10th 1915, was Italian and Catholic, was in WWII the Korean War and Vietnam War, Lived in Philadelphia and 2275 Onslow Rd. Jacksonville NC, was in the 4th division marines, was in the 1st battalion 24th marines "dog company" ground unit machine gun and mortars, Died from lung cancer/ emphysema

Evidence: Purple hearts, address on mail from white house, dog tags, pay stubs, Identification card, metals, key chain, books, Professor stated from knowing Ray

Conclusion: Had a second wife named Elizabeth Johnson

Evidence: New years card

Wednesday, March 20, 2013

Paper One Final Version


Taco Bell commercial rhetorical analysis

Andrew Serafim
English 111
March 21st, 2013


          Juxtaposition is commonly used by rhetoricians in advertising. It is a practice that helps make a memorable advertisement that continues with a person's thoughts and brings them back to wanting a product. Not only is this a common form of advertisement used in the new Taco Bell Super Bowl 2013 commercial but we also see the use of other rhetorical devices at play. There are strong efforts made to incorporate Ethos, Logos, and Pathos into this commercial to draw the attention of the viewer and turn the viewer into a consumer of the idea that Taco Bell represents. It is clear that time and effort were put into research to target a specific group of individuals to connect with and sell to that targeted group, in this case that group is in the age range of teens to middle aged adults. Looking closely into the details of this commercial bring forth the brilliant use of rhetoric in advertisement. Keeping with the theme of “living in the moment” the Taco Bell commercial has masterfully used common rhetorical devices such as juxtaposition, Kairos, Ethos, Logos, and Pathos to really stand out among all of the other commercials developed.
          One of the first ideas presented in this commercial is that you are never too old to have fun. This is a common underlying feeling in the younger generation and is a great example of juxtaposition being used to connect an audience to a message. (Brandon) They accomplish this in the commercial by replacing typical teenagers with older aged people and having the older people do some of the same things that the younger generations find amusing. At the same time this juxtaposition is being used we have another rhetorical device playing in the background of the events going on, that is known as Kairos. Kairos is an ancient Greek word meaning the right or opportune moment.(Freier) We see Kairos through out the whole commercial and it is basically the very essence of the commercial, a few examples are the older people taking advantage of “living in the moment” and having fun despite their age. The fact that they are acting younger then they truly are is another example of Kairos at play and then there are the obvious examples of when one of the elderly men gets a tattoo and one of the elderly women kisses a younger man while at the club. But these two rhetorical devices are still only a part of the commercial, there are other factors that come into the making of this commercial as a strong example of rhetoric.
          The next area that can be analyzed is the use of Ethos or the Greek word meaning "character" that is used to describe the guiding beliefs or ideals that characterize a community, nation, or ideology.(Weiss) This is used in the commercial to establish credibility with the audience the commercial is trying to target. Once again by having the older people doing things that are typical of a younger generation Ethos is established because the younger generation can connect to the ideas being presented. There is also Ethos established in the way that the older people are dressed like a younger generation and have a tendency to do things they could “get caught” for. The feeling of independence and having fun with friends is a strong ideology that younger generations adhere to and can connect well with. This is all centered around going out to eat after having a night full of fun, and the place to go according to this commercial, is Taco Bell.
          With the use of Logos or topics of rational argument or the arguments themselves, the rhetorician uses rationality to convey an idea in this commercial.(Liddell) One way this is done is providing information that is “in the background” of what is really happening during the course of the groups night, an example being that the group is out late and able to eat because Taco Bell is open late. This is a rational statement to many people that are out late and are hungry and therefore looking for somewhere to eat. This is a strong statement that will be in the mind of the viewer the next time they catch themselves out late and hungry.
          Another rhetorical device used is Pathos. Pathos is a Greek term that represents an appeal to the audience's emotions.(Walker) Pathos can be seen in almost all aspects of this commercial, from the “feel” of having a group of friends you can have fun with and be yourself around to the emotion of humor associated with the scene or the commercial, older people acting like a younger generation. Another reinforcement of Pathos is the song in the background. Although it is sung in Spanish in the commercial it is a song that has recently been played on the radio and on stations that are typically aired for the younger generation. This can give the viewer a feeling of comfort if they enjoy the song itself without even having anything to do with Taco Bell and by doing that it will make them more comfortable with the idea that Taco Bell is a good choice. Another way that Pathos can be an influence is the actual setting that the commercial will be viewed in. If the viewer is with friends and their friends find the commercial amusing that can have an emotional impact on the viewers thoughts as well. All of these aspects are thought about when creating advertisements, even the colors used in the commercial will reestablish the viewer with the product. In the club scene there are vibrant colors shown and that can be a reminder for anyone that is familiar with the Taco Bell logo since the logo is lit with vibrant colors.
          Throughout the whole commercial the viewer's mind picks up on these aspects of rhetoric even if they do not know it. From the humor and the entertainment value to the placement of signage and use of emotions the rhetorician in charge of developing the advertisement connects the targeted audience to the product they are trying to sell. Lots of money is spent on research to have the perfect “feel” to an advertisement and make sure that the “feel” stays with the viewer for as long as possible so that the next time they are in the market for, in this case Taco Bell, they will remember that Taco Bell is the right choice when you are hungry late at night.

Monday, March 18, 2013

Paper One, Final Version, Works Cited


Works Cited

    Brandon, Stephen English 111 class notes

     Freier, Mark (2006) "Time Measured by Kairos and Kronos"
     
     Liddell, Henry George and Robert Scott, An Intermediate Greek–English Lexicon

     Walker, Robyn  Strategic Business Communication: For Leaders -  Google Books

     Weiss, Piero and Taruskin, Richard, "Music in the Western World: A History in Documents" (1984)

Peer feedback for revisions of first draft of paper one

Peer feedback for first draft (Jacob)

The first draft I read was for Jacob. In Jacob's draft he has great information about the creators of the commercial and gives a conclusive image of what the creators of the commercial had in mind for the product they are trying to promote. I feel his paper reads smoothly and has very minimum corrections needed. 


Peer feedback for first draft (Sarah)

The second draft I read was for Sarah. I feel that Sarah's makes great progress with her first draft. Some of the parts become confusing with the use of "they" being used to mean different groups of people without specification but overall I feel that the draft reads well and established the goal of what the commercial is about. With minimum corrections this draft can become a well written paper.